Jakiro Pwns You!!

2008 November 4
by Srijan

You came to stun..
but that ain’t ne fun..
choke with my breath..
ice blast to freeze ur choler..
fire surge to keep u burning..
stand not on that oily fire..
it’ll only help u retire..
A cheeky morsel..
Now where will u hide..
u try to run..
but ur path’s been iced..
And If that doesn’t suffice..
Your age is now left with a trice..
Fire comes after the ice..
The Macropyre.. It simply fries..
There’s no mercy..
just a deaf ear for ur cries..
Thy life shall cease..
And as you leave your trace..
The ground shall get..
A frozen corpse..
The air.. a burnt soul.

That’s how Jakiro Pwns You!

PS:

1. Twin Head Dragon Rox!

7 Responses leave one →
  1. 2008 November 4

    Hats Off! :)

  2. 2008 November 4
    MaVeRiK permalink

    Did you know … there are other hero’s too….Jakiro fan..
    Nyways… nice rhyme
    Tis your first attempt ar prose rt ?
    Good one …

  3. 2008 November 4
    A Crazy Person permalink

    roflmao @ jakiro …

  4. 2008 November 5
    Mohit permalink

    2nd faltoo post in 2 weeks…. :P

    ps: btw im still ur fan… :)

  5. 2008 November 5
    Mohit permalink

    @maverick… yeah i agree wid u… nice rhyme..

  6. 2008 November 5
    Himanshu permalink

    bhai , lion ka pwnage bhool gaya .. raat main kitni li thi :P ..

  7. 2008 November 6

    @shubham : Thanks.
    @Maverick : Or heros hai to.. lekin jarkio is one of the most enjoyable heros with 3 spells which need to be aimed. Pudge is up next.
    @Mohit : Your life is getting wasted my friend :P .. try dota asap..
    @Himanshu : Tu bond aadimi hai yaar… :P mai abhi simple heroes se seekh raha hu.. :D

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